By Yasmin Robson

We often see providers deploying long bullet point lists in Ts&Cs and policy documents. Banks and insurers are likely to be approaching this with the best of intentions. After all, breaking information up should make it easier to follow and scan. If bullet points are especially lengthy or used to convey particularly knotty concepts, however, this format could make the information harder to interpret.

We’ve set out three high-level questions to help assess whether bullet points are suitable when drafting documents.

Can each point be kept concise, or are there long sentences?

We’re often asked to support firms with rewriting customer-facing documents. One of the first things we look for is lengthy bullet points which are used to explain multi-faceted topics. Our task is then to unpick these bullets and rewrite them into clearer, shorter sentences.

Of course, bullet points have their place. They can be effective when used to highlight succinct or self-contained points – we know customers like clearly formatted lists they can glance at. For example, contact details can be set out by bullet points in a clear, intuitive way, perhaps with the help of icons to make them stand out.

We’ve also seen firms successfully replace bullet points with numbered steps to provide instructions. Using lists in this way can be helpful in guiding consumers in the actions they should take if they believe their account has been compromised, for example.

Can each point stand alone, or is it a conditional list?

At a very simple level, listing information in bullet points can make it easier to scan. This can be useful when consumers are searching for something specific, such as a particular country. It’s of course much easier to find this information in a list than in a paragraph.

Conditional bullet point lists, where the customer has to read the entire list in one go to completely make sense of the information, are less effective. We often come across long bullet point lists with ‘; and’ or ‘; or’ at the end of each point. This can mean the preamble (the text that introduces the list, usually ending in a colon) and ensuing list is punctuated as one – very long – sentence. As well as reducing readability, the accumulation of several long bullet points that are all related can be overwhelming.

Bullet point lists like this can be difficult to interpret because our cognitive limitations mean we’re unable to retain several pieces of information simultaneously. In this case, grouping closely related points together, or ‘chunking’, and reframing them as full sentences could more meaningfully guide customers through the text. Adding a few clear, descriptive paragraph headings can also help customers form a clearer narrative from the information and improve navigability.

Are the bullet points used sparingly, or are they used to explain everything?

Bullet points comprised of a few words or short sentences can make documents look more approachable and easier to read by cutting straight to the point. Many consumers will associate financial documents with dense walls of text, so bullet points can be a welcome snappier alternative.

In this way, bullet points can be useful in providing summaries within each section of longer documents or bringing prominence to key facts. This might include penalty fees in a banking Ts&Cs document, or commonly misunderstood exclusions in an insurance policy booklet, for example.

Reserving bullet points for key information and summaries can also increase the chances of consumers taking away the key facts, even if they only skim through the document. It’s of course important to be selective here – if bullet point lists crop up on every page, consumers may be less likely to pay attention to them.

To conclude: bullets or paragraphs?

Overly simplistic assumptions about bullet points making customer-facing documents easier to read should be challenged. At best, poorly considered bullet points can look like a half-hearted attempt at providing some formatting variety in a dense document. At worst, they can risk overwhelming consumers by forcing them to navigate through long, inter-linked points in a convoluted list. Use our three questions above to help you get to the bottom of whether bullet points are the right way to go.

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